Persuasive Speech Rubric Y11

Scale → Skill ↓	1 (developing)	2 (intermediate)	3 (expert)
Clarity	Learner does not speak in complete sentences. Learner is not really heard by the audience.	Learner speaks in full and complete sentences. Learner is heard by the audience most of the time.	Learner speaks in full and complete sentences, even when sentences are rather sophisticated. Learner speaks clearly and is heard by the audience throughout.
Persuasion	Individual does not use persuasion and is not able to get his/her point across. Learner does not use character information and is irrelevant.	Individual uses some persuasive techniques,. Learner uses body expression and movement to get his point across at times. Learners makes points but they are sometimes unclear.	Individual is able to persuade the audience. Learner uses a range of techniques including language and body movement effectively. Learner makes strong points and makes a relevant and informative case to persuade the audience.
Body Language (emotions)	The learner has showed little body movement appropriate to the task The learner has shown little reaction to the audience	The learner has shown some body movement appropriate to the task The learner has shown some emotion towards the audience	The learner has shown appropriate and sophisticated body language to help him or her persuade the audience The learner has shown a range of emotions towards the audience
Interaction	Speaker reacts appropriately rarely/never. Speaker interacts more with notes than audience.	Speaker reacts appropriately sometimes. Speaker uses notes occasionally.	Speaker reacts appropriately most/all of the time. Speaker uses notes in such a way that it is not noticeable OR does not use notes at all.

My Personal Target: To successfully get my arguments across to the audience and persuade them to ‘let me stay on the plane’.

Ann’s Comment :
- You should have used more body language.
- Your emotions matched your face.


For this CA I don't think I was as prepared as I could have been for a number of reasons, but I did however try my best to speak clearly and get my points across and I think I did manage to do that. When I was speaking, I was speaking a bit faster than I could think and that caused me to jumble up my thoughts. I was expecting the feedback I got and understood why I got it.

Reflection

This week I got to work more on my writing and I found that when I write a short story I tend to forget about paragraphs. I do know that paragraphs are needed to separate parts of the story but I always somehow think this does not apply to short stories. Through making a writing mat, I now have reminders telling me not only about paragraphs but also to think about the purpose and audience when I'm writing. We also started a literature circle this week that I found very helpful because we got to share our thoughts, perspectives and information we have regarding the story/chapters we read. Having this literature circle also means that we will always be reading and improving our vocabulary.

Cleaning the Kitchen

I woke up last Saturday to the familiar aroma of coffee and toast. The smell that wafted through the air had this tinge of bitterness that told me that mom had once again burnt the toast and it reminded me that she soon had to leave for work. I rushed down the rickety creaking stairs just in time to catch mom leaving the front door. After I gave her a hug and said the usual "miss you" and "please don't come back too late" she told me to clean up the burnt bits of toast off the counter. I nodded and walked back to the kitchen just in time to look out the window over the sink to see mom driving down the street, I smiled as I waved at the car hoping to get a wave back. There wasn't one. I ran the tap over an old cloth and started wiping the blackened crumbs off the counter. I began to think about how I hate that mom has to work through weekends just to make ends meet. I keep telling her that I could get a job but she always tells me that I should focus on school and that people my age shouldn't have to worry about these kinds of problems. Seeing her having to work all the time makes me feel very useless and in the way. If only I could be wiped away just like the crumbs on the counter.

Reflection

This week we had to make a poster that was informative but at the same time eye-catching and interesting to read. I managed to make my poster organised and informative but I did not achieve my goal of trying to make it eye-catching. Judging by the comments I received from my peers, I think that I should have made the poster more colourful and the layout of the poster less rigid so that it would not seem boring. I will definitely keep this in mind the next time I make a poster.

Comma Poster and Peer Assesment

Reflection

This week I got to practice my writing skills during the writing task where we had to expand on a story we were given. Having a limited amount of time to do this required effective planning. We had five minutes in the beginning to plan, I used a lot of that time to come up with a story line that I ended up changing while I was writing. I think I should have thought my ideas through a bit more instead of going straight into writing the story. I also need to think about pacing myself because I found that I had only written half the story when there was not much time left. Overall I think I need to work on planning effectively and pacing myself when I am writing.

Writing Challenge (Shark)

I will never forget that day, it was nice and sunny unlike the previous ones that were all dull and gloomy. I did not know how much more time I had left on the island but I thought I should make the most of the experience and explore all it had to offer. I went down to the shore, the air was unusually still but still very warm. I became very aware that I was still alone.

I spotted something far off into the horizon and before I knew it I was swimming out to it. I felt a strange urge to want to find out exactly what it was. I had been swimming for quite a while and I did not really know what I was looking for anymore. I turned back to swim to shore but I couldn't see it anymore; I had found myself in the middle of the ocean with nothing and no one.

I was unusually calm considering the situation I was in. I let myself get carried away by the waves until I felt something brush up against my leg; a large fin emerged right in front of me. I was stunned and my body froze up. I was trying to think of what to do and at the same time not over think. It came close to me again but this time, I didn't hesitate and started swimming the other way.

Luckily enough, whatever was near me was now far away. I could see it fading into the distance. I knew I was safe.