Persuasive Speech Rubric Y11

Scale → Skill ↓	1 (developing)	2 (intermediate)	3 (expert)
Clarity	Learner does not speak in complete sentences. Learner is not really heard by the audience.	Learner speaks in full and complete sentences. Learner is heard by the audience most of the time.	Learner speaks in full and complete sentences, even when sentences are rather sophisticated. Learner speaks clearly and is heard by the audience throughout.
Persuasion	Individual does not use persuasion and is not able to get his/her point across. Learner does not use character information and is irrelevant.	Individual uses some persuasive techniques,. Learner uses body expression and movement to get his point across at times. Learners makes points but they are sometimes unclear.	Individual is able to persuade the audience. Learner uses a range of techniques including language and body movement effectively. Learner makes strong points and makes a relevant and informative case to persuade the audience.
Body Language (emotions)	The learner has showed little body movement appropriate to the task The learner has shown little reaction to the audience	The learner has shown some body movement appropriate to the task The learner has shown some emotion towards the audience	The learner has shown appropriate and sophisticated body language to help him or her persuade the audience The learner has shown a range of emotions towards the audience
Interaction	Speaker reacts appropriately rarely/never. Speaker interacts more with notes than audience.	Speaker reacts appropriately sometimes. Speaker uses notes occasionally.	Speaker reacts appropriately most/all of the time. Speaker uses notes in such a way that it is not noticeable OR does not use notes at all.

My Personal Target: To successfully get my arguments across to the audience and persuade them to ‘let me stay on the plane’.

Ann’s Comment :
- You should have used more body language.
- Your emotions matched your face.


For this CA I don't think I was as prepared as I could have been for a number of reasons, but I did however try my best to speak clearly and get my points across and I think I did manage to do that. When I was speaking, I was speaking a bit faster than I could think and that caused me to jumble up my thoughts. I was expecting the feedback I got and understood why I got it.